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GUYS I’M DOING THE POETRY CONTEST YAY!!! But i dont know if this poem is any good can you guys comment and see if it is good or do i need to make changes

My Old Friend by Breezi My old friend When will i see you again? You came and went But never stayed when i begged So i cried and cried but it never solved Until i heard a tragedy that happend in your presets And now your gone Wait for me there and it will be soon We will one day Look down from the sky and have a great day.

Is it any good guys I dont know So please comment and wish me luck to win 500 dolors!!!!

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Breezi

I love reading, writing, and art its awesome.

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